在考研英语的Part A 小作文部分,书信作为考查的重点所在,种类繁多。在前面我们曾就以题目为例,详细地解析过前四种书信:即建议信、投诉信、咨询信和感谢信的写作方法及其注意事项。今天本文就对考研英语小作文中的第五类书信祝贺信进行深入的分析。
祝贺信,英文中称为 letter of congratulation。在西方国家,当得知某位朋友面临毕业、新婚、生子、升职抑或乔迁等喜事的时候,往往会立刻向对方写信祝贺,这是与对方加深友好感情关系的绝佳机会。写这种书信时,需做到真诚自然、亲切动人。
一般来说,在考研英语中,祝贺信主体部分的写作可按照三个步骤进行,即三步走策略。接下来就以题目为例,具体解析一下这个策略。
例题:
Directions:
Suppose your friend, Bai Ruo, has just been admitted to Peking University as a postgraduate. Write a letter to congratulate him.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead.
Do not write the address.
题目要求向你的朋友白鄀写一封信,祝贺他被北京大学录取成为研究生。根据上面所提的祝贺信写作三步走策略,具体操作如下:
首段:I am writing this letter to send my sincerest congratulations on your admission to Peking University as a postgraduate.
三步走策略中的第一步也就是上面的首段,只有一句话,说明写信目的。既然这是一封祝贺信,那么写信的目的自然就是向收信人表示祝贺,而这也正是题目所给出的写作要求。此外,在祝贺信中,表明写信目的之后还需简述祝贺的缘由,使书信的交流功能更加准确和有效,这也是写信的常识问题。对于以上两点内容,简单来说,可用一句话表达,即I am writing this letter to send my congratulations on
中段:During the past four years, you kept improving and devoted yourself into your major study. I am delighted that the four years of your study has been rewarded in this way. It is obvious that you will have a promising future in front of you.
在祝贺信中,本段的主要内容就是就所要祝贺之事进行具体的阐释,这也是写祝贺信的主要难点所在。进一步来说,就是解释该事是收信人的劳有所获、天道酬勤,而并非是偶然投机之事。具体安排上,可按上面所给范文中总结为:过去努力了,现在回报了,未来很美好。根据这样一个时间上的先后,合理安排写作内容。
尾段:Once again, congratulations on your admission. I hope that you will make great achievement in your future study and life. I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.
本段中第一句话通过once again+congratulations,再次表达了自己对收信人的祝贺情。之后,第二句话和第三句话都表达了自己对收信人未来的美好祝愿,希望对方会有更大的成就等等。
在考研英语的书信表达中,类似的首段或尾段的套用句式比较丰富,大家需要在复习过程中进行有意的积累,并在写作中加以运用:
1. I am much delighted to hear...
2. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.
3. Please accept my heartiest congratulations on...
4. Its the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.
5. I congratulate you on your success.
6. I believe...will be a new beginning,a chance for you to embrace a broader future.
7. I wish you good luck in the pursuit of a brilliant career.
8. Congratulations and all best wishes.
因此,该题的完整范文如下:
Dear Bai Ruo,
I am writing this letter to send my sincerest congratulations on your admission to Peking University as a postgraduate.
During the past four years, you kept improving and devoted yourself into your major study. I am delighted that the four years of your study has been rewarded in this way. It is obvious that you will have a promising future in front of you.
Once again, congratulations on your admission. I hope that you will make great achievement in your future study and life. I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(本文作者为查字典公务员考研辅导老师张玉环[微博])
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