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考研英语小作文道歉信(8-10分)范文赏析二

2014-09-23 | 网络

Dear Prof.Wong,

I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.

To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

Sincerely yours,

LiMing

考研英语作文批改点评如下:

Dear Prof.Wong,

I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(删除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (删除)prevented me from any activity.

To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

Sincerely yours,

LiMing

8分

同学你好,作文写的很好,但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事,因此要用过去时。

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