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考研英语小作文道歉信(8-10分)范文赏析一

2014-09-23 | 网络

考研英语待批改作文:

第一篇

Dear David,

I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.

The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.

Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下:

Dear David,

I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.

The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could(删除) send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check(用词不当) the record and send my feedback to you.

Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

8分

同学你好,你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的主将从现。

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